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Wait... What? If Leo and City 17 can have a comic...



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#1 Posted 01 February 2006 - 06:37 AM

Well, after the sudden increase in comic making that has sprung up, I thought I'd give it a go myself. And you may be thinking "Oh God, not *ANOTHER* G-mod comic. But huzzah! This comic will be made in all sorts of games. (Hopefully).

For now, present you two comics. There is no connecting storyline, there is no HLfallout characters (Though I may consider it :phew), and I'm hoping you'll like it.

Point of note: First time using Garrys Mod, so, err, yeah. :phew
Point of note 2: I suck at PSP7.

I think it came out alright. Room fr improvement of course, but I like 'em. :smile

Enjoy!

Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3 (Version 1)
Episode 3 (Version 2)

I've got an idea for Episode 3, so I may make that later tonight.

Please share your thoughts! :):

(And I'm aware there are a few differences in each Comics titles and such. The what I was supposed to use in both was the title in Epissde 1. Episode 2 got the wrong title by mistake >_>)
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#2 Posted 01 February 2006 - 07:49 AM

Very nice, at this rate we are going to need a “Official Comics” thread
Episode 1: didn't like (to much reading not enough action)
Episode 2 : Raised a smile (:smile)



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#3 Posted 01 February 2006 - 08:59 AM

episode was funny.

You get a place in my heart...



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#4 Posted 01 February 2006 - 12:21 PM

Damn you! I was going to start a comic!
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#5 Posted 01 February 2006 - 12:26 PM

I looked but found no humour in either of them.

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There is no connecting storyline, there is no HLfallout characters

Right is that why at the top of the second comic it says "HLF Regular".



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#6 Posted 01 February 2006 - 01:23 PM

second one was good, first one the pictures looked a little streched, but the joke was good!



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#8 Posted 01 February 2006 - 01:36 PM

both sucked sry



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#9 Posted 01 February 2006 - 01:46 PM

WEAK



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#10 Posted 01 February 2006 - 02:32 PM

View Postdonttrustevery3, on Feb 1 2006, 01:36 PM, said:

both sucked sry



View PostCRAZYMAN, on Feb 1 2006, 01:46 PM, said:

WEAK

Could we keep criticism constructive please??



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#11 Posted 01 February 2006 - 02:40 PM

View PostJuo, on Feb 1 2006, 02:32 PM, said:

Could we keep criticism constructive please??

Okay.

In the first comic the first 2 panels are so dark I can't actually see what's occuring. The only way you call tell he was shooting or being shot is because of what is said later on.

The joke further down about his "examination" is just not funny at all.

Comic 2: reused the same 2 images for the entire comic, not even changing anything at all.
The joke is not funny either... the only way it may seem even slightly humourous is if the person reading it took part in that thread on "Fast paced shooters". Even if they took part in that thread they will probably not find it funny, as people that type like that are hated more than found funny.



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#12 Posted 01 February 2006 - 03:01 PM

I chuckled at the 2nd one.

Nice use of fonts in Ep. 2- the left looks highly authoritative. Also, the "newb" looks like some nerdy people I know...



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#13 Posted 01 February 2006 - 03:24 PM

I really didn't get the first one.

The second one was at least marginally funny - but not more than that.
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#14 Posted 01 February 2006 - 04:14 PM

The first one: Not really any good, I think. I didn't think it was funny at all, sorry.

The second one: All to true. xD This one WAS funny, good one. :8



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#15 Posted 01 February 2006 - 08:31 PM

View PostCommanderZx2, on Feb 2 2006, 01:26 AM, said:

Right is that why at the top of the second comic it says "HLF Regular".


What I meant was I wouldn't be using any specific people (like you or myself) from the HLFallout community.

View PostCity 17, on Feb 2 2006, 02:23 AM, said:

second one was good, first one the pictures looked a little streched, but the joke was good!


Thanks city! :): And yeah, I had to really mess up the last panel in episode 1 to get it to fit properly.

View PostCommanderZx2, on Feb 2 2006, 03:40 AM, said:

In the first comic the first 2 panels are so dark I can't actually see what's occuring. The only way you call tell he was shooting or being shot is because of what is said later on.


Yes, sorry about that. I only realised it was so dark after I looked at the screenshots. I'm still a gmod nub, so I'm learning. :smile

View PostCommanderZx2, on Feb 2 2006, 03:40 AM, said:

The joke further down about his "examination" is just not funny at all.


Comes down to what people find funny I guess. Some people may like it, so might not.

View PostCommanderZx2, on Feb 2 2006, 03:40 AM, said:

The joke is not funny either... the only way it may seem even slightly humourous is if the person reading it took part in that thread on "Fast paced shooters". Even if they took part in that thread they will probably not find it funny, as people that type like that are hated more than found funny.


It was more focused on the Noob + Gman theories (In a way). Most people (from what I've read) liked the 2nd one more than the 1st one, so It just depends weather or not you find it funny.


Episode 3 is on it's way. It'll also be slightly different, as it will come with two different endings.
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